Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Friday, 9 August 2019
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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hi lucy its micah i like your self control it is so cool next time you can talk about your self what do you do at home ok that is it lucy ok bye.
ReplyDeletehi lucy its brodie here i like how you put a cool background.Did you think about putting full stops?.next time you could add full stops.
ReplyDeleteHi It's Cody good job do you now anything else about informative writing you now I made one as well next time you should put more facts ok bye.
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