Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Wednesday, 31 July 2019
5 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
hey viewers dont leve mean ones
ReplyDeletehi it is lexi her i like the one abat prototec bekas it is ihsing to rad good on you mabe you cob tiy stage 5 nees time.
ReplyDeleteKia ora lexi thank you for commmenting maybe next time if you are struggling to spell words you should try and ask some to help you in stead of struggling
Deletehey lucy its benaiah
ReplyDeletei liked the way you you put the hat for be safe
you brought me back to when we did it as a class it was fun
next time you could put more stuff to be good on online
by
Bonjour Lucy it's me Addison
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the part when it said be positive online because I think that is really positive for other people to know how to be positive and how to leave a nice blog comment.
You taught me to right a nice blog comment and to be positive online and I hope that helped other people to.
Next time you could make the picture bigger so people can see it better instead of having to squint.
Otherwise this was really good and I hope you have a good day Bye
Sincerely Addison.